literature

Winds

Deviation Actions

rakunow's avatar
By
Published:
300 Views

Literature Text

Life is but a passing moment
like a shooting star seen tonight,
a spark in madman's troubled mind
or was it just poets art well timed?

Perfect silence in space eternal
from where love would never return,
weak heartbeat inviting death
closer and closer with one last breath.

For the last funeral they march,
ghosts slowly disappear under the arch,
dry leaves carried across the cemetery
by wind that whispers a sad melody.
Comments12
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
sammyxfreak's avatar
I love your metaphors! I am more of a literal poet so when people use metaphors it makes my heart sing. I enjoyed your use of rhyme. sometimes in other people's poems the rhyme can be distracting but in this case it actually helped and made the poem even better. I thoroughly enjoyed this poem. Thank you for sharing this with the world!